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Old 03-30-2007, 08:15 AM   #1
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OK, I finally got to this. I'm sorry for delaying it... But, on with the show!
But before the fic--
audience: Aww...
I'd like to thank antgirl1, who's quotes inspired me to write it in the first place, and for a quote I will tell later.

Super Swap
A fic by Bloonan.

One average saturday at Foster's, Mac and Goo decided to come early. But Goo came with a big thought on her mind...

Goo: GUYS! I've got something really cool to tell you! I had a dream last night. No not yesterday's last night, the night that came yesterday! But anyway, I had a weird dream, you know dreams are strange because dreams are said to be in another dimention, you know it'd be cool if it was another dimention, and someone made a portal so someone could go and visit dreams...

Everyone: GOO!

Bloo: Get to the point!

Goo: OK. I dreamed everybody was each other! Bloo was Wilt, Ed was going "Coco coco", and I was Mac! I was thinking about it aaaaaall the way here!

Mac: You were thinking about that? Oh, no.

Suddenly, a new green IF bursts through the door.

Goo: Mac, I think that was a problem.

New IF: Hello there! How are you? I am Shwitchlor! I have come to swap you all!

Bloo: Swap us? What does that mean?

Switchlor: You shall see. ALAKASWAP!

Suddenly, a green magical magic cloud of
MAGIC!!!
blasts over all the gang. When the cloud clears, noone feels like themself anymore...

Bloo(?): Hey... why do I feel so short and out-of-shape?... I'm blue?!?!?

Goo(?): Sheesh, Bloo. Why act so strange? You know all those things already! Hey... wait... why is my hair suddenly in ponytails?

Ed(?): Cococococococo! Co! Co!

Coco(?): Nice Coco imitation Ed! Haha!... Wait... I am Ed!

Goo(?): Wait.. the only explanation for this is...

Everyone: I'm YOU!!!

INTERUPTION!

Name key:
Bloo(Wilt) = Bloo in Wilt's body.
Wilt(Bloo) = Wilt in Bloo's body.
Mac(Goo) = Mac in Goo's body.
Goo(Mac) = Goo in Mac's body.
Ed(Coco) = Ed in Coco's body.
Coco(Ed) = Coco in Ed's body.

END INTERUPTION!

Goo(Mac): Don't worry, guys... all we need to do is find Switchlor and swap back.

Bloo(Wilt): And this can be cool in some ways!

Ed(Coco): Si! This can be muy, muy fun!

Wilt(Bloo) *angrily*: And how is that?

Bloo(Wilt): Suction-cuppy fingers...and toes...

Wilt(Bloo): ...?

Bloo(Wilt): COOL now I can be TRANCHULADUDE! I bet I could walk on walls with these suction cups! *removes the shoes and socks* ...EEWW! Wiiiiiiiiiilt! Do you EVER wash your FEET? Serious foot odor issues!

Wilt(Bloo): It doesn't smell THAT bad!

Bloo(Wilt): Well that's 'cuz you're USED TO IT. Now I see WHY you never take these off.

After Bloo spends five hours in the bathroom washing Wilt's feet, Goo brings bad news...

Goo(Mac): Guys... when I imagined Switchlor, I thought about the changes becomeing permaneit after fifteen hours....

Everyone: WHAT?!?!?

Mac(Goo): Imagine a timer!

A timer appears in front of the gang, stating 9:45:32.

Mac(Goo): We don't have much time! We have to track Switchlor down, fast!

END for now. My fingers are starting to hurt... I'll post the rest later...
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Old 03-30-2007, 01:08 PM   #2
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Aww. You're welcome.

Awesome so far! Can't wait for more.
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Old 03-30-2007, 01:45 PM   #3
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Thanks! I'm in a case of writer's block, though. I can't finish up the 2nd part yet.
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Old 03-30-2007, 02:48 PM   #4
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Old 03-30-2007, 03:46 PM   #5
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I like the story so far, and already, it's my favorite one.
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Old 03-30-2007, 06:52 PM   #6
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OK, there'll be more parts. I still can't find an ending.

Super swap part...
2!!!

Mac(Goo): OK, here's the plan. We split up with the person we swapped with and search the house for Switchlor. When one of us finds him, they signal for the rest. Then, we corner him and make him swap us back.

Bloo(Wilt): Willlt! Why don't your suction cups stick to things?

Wilt(Bloo): They're not supposed to! I wasn't imagined to be Turanchula dude!

Bloo(Wilt): But I wanted to be Turanchuladude...

Mac(Goo): *sigh*

Bloo(Wilt): At least I own your basketball skillz! I could beat Foul Larry with one arm missing!.. which Wilt tried to do... and failed...

Wilt(Bloo): BLOO! I can't believe this! You are just wasting our time, I mean sheesh!

Frankie: *enters room, hears Bloo speaking in Wilt's voice* Woah, Bloo, are you going through puberty or something? *leaves room*

Bloo(Wilt): Awww... now Frankie thinks I'm getting old...

Mac(Goo): Let's carry out our plan...

Bloo(Wilt): I'll head into the next room. *Walks away* Oof! *falls down* Well played, door frame, well played... *kneels down and enters room*

Mac(Goo): OK, let's -

Bloo(Wilt): *faintly in next room* Oof! Well played again, door frame...

Mac(Goo): OK, NOW let's get on with the plan.

Wilt(Bloo): I hope he doesn't give my body brain damage...

Timer: 8:32:59.

Mac(Goo): We just lost a lot of time. Let's go!

With Wilt and Bloo:

Bloo(Wilt): I bet I could whoop you at Basketball.

Wilt(Bloo): You could not!

Bloo(Wilt): Could too!

Wilt(Bloo): Could not!

Bloo(Wilt): Could too!

Wilt(Bloo): Could not!

Bloo(Wilt): Could too! In fact, I chalenge you to a match.

Wilt(Bloo): Fine!

35 minutes later...

Bloo(Wilt): I beat you! Uh-huh! I beat you! Uh-huh!

Wilt(Bloo): Don't rub it in.

Bloo(Wilt): Do I sence a hint of jelosy in your voice?

Wilt(Bloo): Sheesh! Stop! Is that OK? We lost a lot of time!

Timer: 8:00:00.

Wilt(Bloo): See? We only have eight hours untill we're like this forever!!!

Bloo(Wilt): And I chould care why? I like being you.

Wilt(Bloo): Well, now, I have property of all your paddleballs.

Bloo(Wilt): No talk! We find Switchlor! NOW!!!

To be continued...
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Old 03-30-2007, 07:08 PM   #7
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LAWL. Awesome!!
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Old 03-31-2007, 04:11 AM   #8
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Great chapter you got there, Bloonan.
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Old 03-31-2007, 11:02 AM   #9
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Bloo(Wilt): Suction-cuppy fingers...and toes...

Wilt(Bloo): ...?

Bloo(Wilt): COOL now I can be TRANCHULADUDE! I bet I could walk on walls with these suction cups! *removes the shoes and socks* ...EEWW! Wiiiiiiiiiilt! Do you EVER wash your FEET? Serious foot odor issues!

Wilt(Bloo): It doesn't smell THAT bad!

Bloo(Wilt): Well that's 'cuz you're USED TO IT. Now I see WHY you never take these off.

After Bloo spends five hours in the bathroom washing Wilt's feet, Goo brings bad news...
xD That's too great. I love it. x3
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Old 04-06-2007, 07:55 PM   #10
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Cool story! I can't wait to see wait will happen next..
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