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11-10-2006, 08:25 AM | #11 |
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It sounds like Bloo, it fits him well, and it's hilarious.
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11-10-2006, 10:04 AM | #12 |
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Here's chapter 3!
The next morning..."CHEESE! Hurry up!" Bloo screamed pounding on the bathroom door. Cheese was standing in the shower staring up at the water, his mouth wasn wide open. It filled with water, he swallowed it. Cheese started over again. "WILT! You have all the keys, open the door!" Bloo commanded, Wilt opened the door. Cheese was standing on the carpet. "Sorry, but what are you doing?" Wilt asked. Cheese responded, "Drieing off". "Move it!" Bloo forced Wilt & Cheese out of the room. In the Dining Room... "I like tacos" Cheese announced. "No tacos, Pancakes!" Ed replied. "Ooooooh! Gimme!" Cheese cooed. WHACK! Cheese threw a pancake at poor Eduardo. "Ew! I is all sticky with syrup now!" he cried. WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! Pancakes were every where. " No pancakes for Cheese ever again!" Frankie yelled pulling a pancake out of her hair. "Hey Bloo come & check this out!" Fluffer Nutter told the blue blob. Cheese was stuck in George Mucas. "Get him out! Get him out!" George cried. "STIIIICKY!" Cheese yelled inside. "Ew, that's sick" New Guy said. "Got that right" Jhaki agreed. "What is going on he--- Oh my, Ms.FRANCES!" Mr. Herriman said. Frankie walked around the corner. "WHA--Oh god" she replied. Frankie carefully pulled Cheese out of George. "You OK?" she asked. "Mmm hmm" George said, he wiggled off. "CHEESE! Go watch TV!" Frankie told Cheese getting really annoyed. "OK" Cheese said walking off. |
11-14-2006, 01:26 PM | #13 |
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Here's Ch.4 you guys need to post more often!
Cheese was staring at static. "Cheese what are doing?" Mac sighed. "Shh...Ant show!" Cheese replied angrily.Mac turned the channel. "Cheese your eyes will get messed by watching sta---" Mac said interrupted."Ant show?" "Yes, ant show" "YAY!" Mac walked off shaking his head, why Cheese was such an idiot he would never know. " Sorry, but the basketball game is on!" Wilt said turning the channel. "OOH! I like balls" Cheese commented. Cheese watched. 30 seconds later..... "'Dis is booooring!" he whined. "Cool! A game's on!" Bloo said jumping coming in the room. He waited for Cheese. "Move!" he demanded. Cheese sat there. "Errr...", Bloo pushed Cheese off. Cheese thought of a stupid plan.... Cheese wants his spot back a voice said. "AH! What's 'dat?" Cheese screamed in terror. I'm your mind it said. "Ooh, I like" Short, I know. |
11-14-2006, 01:30 PM | #14 |
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LOL, "ant show". That is so Cheese!
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11-14-2006, 03:59 PM | #15 |
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Yep thought of that myself. *drools*
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11-18-2006, 08:39 AM | #17 |
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Ch.5!
"Hey Bloooooooo...ooo!" a voice called. "SHUT UP CHEESE!" Bloo yelled back. "Awwwwww.....Oooh! A crack!" Cheese said staring at a smallcrack in the wall.10 minutes later... "Oh yeeeeah...da sofa!" "YES!" Wilt yelled, someone had just scored against his most hated team. "Oh yeah...Sorry." he replied embrassed. "Hey Bloo want some pizza?" another voice asked. "A. you bring it to me or B. I'm not getting up!" Bloo replied."Awwww..." Cheese whined seeing Coco. "Wee! ccocococococococococo!" he shouted. Coco satred at him, wondering why he just said that. "Working paddleball?! I'm there!" Bloo said excitedly, running off. "I like sofas!" Cheese said sitting on the sofa. Wilt shsuhed Cheese. Later... Ice cream was everywhere. "Err... Who would do this?" "I like pudin" "Let me guess, Cheese did you do this?!" "Yesss" Pfft! " I pooted" Sniff! Sniff! "Ugh! Gross" Frankie said running off. Last edited by Invader Bloo; 11-18-2006 at 08:39 AM. |
11-24-2006, 04:40 PM | #18 |
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ch.6! Only 1 ch. left, I only did this one so I can have a reason for Cheese in my fan fics.
Shhhh! Frankie sprayed air freshner, she put it down. "Oooh!" Cheese grabbed the can. SSSH! "CHEESE! NO!" Frankie yelled urgently. "Ahhhhh! STINGY!" Cheese screeched in pain. Frankie grabbed Cheese & rushed in the bathroom. Later.... "What's up with your eye Cheese? Ooh maybe you were alergic to Frankie's shirt so they went...BOOM & got all puffed up" Goo rambled. "Whaaaat?" Cheese asked banging his head on a wall. "Ow! Seniorita Frankie when will senior Cheese's eyes be better? They make me cringy!" Eduardo asked scared. " Only a couple hours Ed" Frankie replied. "Co coco co" Coco clucked. "Sorry, but that's real mean Coco!" Wilt told Coco. "Cococo!" Coco responded. Short I know. |
11-24-2006, 06:58 PM | #19 |
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I'm wondering what mean thing Coco said.
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11-24-2006, 07:20 PM | #20 |
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He deserved it.
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