Manga inspired Foster's art

[antgirl1]

I wonder if by now Frankie has someone who also works with her alongside her. At some point she'd need extra help, with all the chores Herriman gives her every day... (Wilt doesn't count lol)

[pitbulllady]

Originally Posted by antgirl1

I wonder if by now Frankie has someone who also works with her alongside her. At some point she'd need extra help, with all the chores Herriman gives her every day... (Wilt doesn't count lol)

Why WOULDN'T Wilt count? I guarantee if he were no longer there, she'd realize just how much he does around the house, and how much she does indeed count on him. They might as well put him on the payroll with all he does there, even though I'm sure he's perfectly content doing all that work volunteer, just to help out.

pitbulllady

[Cassini90125]

Sounds like your saying that Frankie can't handle her job on her own. I find that more than a little disrespectful.

[rossfellow]

I?m rewriting the whole thing. Now looking back, both the art and pacing are way out of wack. I need a to decide on a style that compromises between my two influences (CN and modern manga style).

Here?s an attempt. Also possible spoiler, now that I look at it.


Plus? Who remembers Red Hooded Chacha from the old CN days?


As for the Frankie beef, you?re all wrong. I?m not telling why, though.

[Medikor]

Your previous stuff was great, Ross but I love the idea that you're after. An even blend of CN and Manga is a wonderful idea and certainly make the final product more approachable to a wider audience.
Don't give up! Sometimes the greatest achievements in entertainment were redone from scratch before they reached an audience. Resident Evil 4's story was redone from scratch about four times before it became the masterpiece that it is now.

[Partymember]

Originally Posted by pitbulllady

Why WOULDN'T Wilt count? I guarantee if he were no longer there, she'd realize just how much he does around the house, and how much she does indeed count on him. They might as well put him on the payroll with all he does there, even though I'm sure he's perfectly content doing all that work volunteer, just to help out.

pitbulllady

if Wilt does tons of work i'm sure she both acknowledges and appreciates it ???

Anyway, Frankie looks like a total paramilitary in that sketch.

(that would be bada$$, thats all i'm sayin... )

[rossfellow]

Originally Posted by Partymember

if Wilt does tons of work i'm sure she both acknowledges and appreciates it ???

Anyway, Frankie looks like a total paramilitary in that sketch.

(that would be bada$$, thats all i'm sayin... )

You've guessed half of it

[Partymember]

ha!

commando Frankie

[Mr. Marshmallow]

I think why Cass is upset Pitbull (and I can see why) is the fact the way you phrased Wilt's service at Foster's, you made it sound like he was more important to Fosters then Frankie was. Wilt has indeed be a truly helpful friend and done A LOT for for Fosters but I don't think Frankie would view Wilt leaving like that.

You make it sound that Frankie views Wilt's absence more in a commercial sense then an emotional one, that she would be screwed without him and that she took his kindness for granted which is false on both accounts for Frankie. She values Wilt and his help but its obvious she keeps Fosters up more then Wilt does.

I am not down playing Wilt's service but considering the totality of what Frankie does compared to the amount Wilt does, Frankie does more work then for like 10 people. She bends over backwards and breaks every emotional, physical, and mental bone in her body trying to keep this house together and she has probably been doing this even before Wilt got there.

Yes, Wilt is a great, valuable, and helpful asset but I don't for one minute believe that Frankie wouldn't be dependable enough to run Foster's without Wilt being there. That's all.

[rossfellow]

Save the debate for when I actually reach chapter two. >.>

Comments on the revision charsheets so far? I tried something I'm not used to: semi-chibi proportions.