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Old 02-11-2007, 10:37 AM   #11
Voxxyn
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Alright, I got a new idea to share, to prove that I'm not merely criticizing everything that gets posted here. This is intended as a short, though longer than 2 minutes:

Summary

Bloo is at the Foster's office with Mr. Herriman and Frankie, along with a big brown box which contains some sort of unidentified "prank tools", which he apparently tried to use but was caught redhanded, and is now awaiting punishment. After lambasting and chewing him out for a few seconds, Herriman and Frankie order Bloo to stand in a corner and count to ten. Bloo instantly obeys, thinking(and relieved) that that will be his punishment...

...and as he counts, the camera pans back, and we see the shadows of Frankie and Herriman tiptoing through the corner wall in which Bloo is standing, who is completely unaware that they are actually giggling and hoisting something heavy on their hands... Frankie is heard softly snickering something like "this is going to be goooooooooood"...

Once Bloo finishes counting and turns back to face the office, he discovers that Frankie and Herriman are gone. Ecstatic, Bloo dives into the box of pranks without anyone seeing him--only to be stunned when he realizes that the box is empty.

Cut to Duchess. She's awaiting an expensive dinner in a specially-made room for her in one of the top floors, bullying a group of small IFs into doing her errands. Mr. Herriman then arrives wheeling in a veiled traycart supposed to be brimming with meals, and he orders them to leave, much to Duchess' anger. Herriman promises that the meal will be more than worth it, and he pulls off the veil--revealing a giggly-faced Frankie aiming a gigantic toy cannon at Duchess' face, and fires instantly, filling Her Royal Lowness with sticky and slippery slime.

Duchess runs around the entire house, screaming and wailing, unaware that she's been humiliated and that everybody in the house is laughing at her, until she tumbles in the foyer, in front of a confused Bloo. Frankie and Herriman walk in with triumphant expressions, while Bloo pouts at them for beating them to the prank that he was originally planning to make.

The point of this short is to show that even responsible adults can be driven to get childlike revenge on those who are ultra-annoying and terrible(i.e. Duchess). What do you think?

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