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HerrimanWasHere · 01-27-2009, 06:28 PM

Here is the info: I am planning on doing a FHfIF/Sound of Music crossover. But I hadn't drawn Frankie before, so I tried sketching out a few different expressions. Because I want this crossover to be perfect, I want you to criticise me...And harshly. If you have any suggestions, I'll take those too. (Anyone know where to find a Frankie tutorial?)

Lynnie · 01-27-2009, 06:49 PM

I think you did a great job on all four of them, honestly.

I like the first one the best, I love that pouty look. The second one seems a little off I suppose, I think her head is too oblong and her bangs are a bit too long. The fourth one her head seems small, and her chin has become flush with her neck. But I think the first and third are near perfect.

frankie_fan · 01-27-2009, 07:01 PM

I agree. The first one I like the best. I think Cass is gonna love this.

Cassini90125 · 01-27-2009, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by frankie_fan

I agree. The first one I like the best. I think Cass is gonna love this.

You think correctly.

Hard to pick a favorite, really, but I'm kind of partial to #4, if only because she's wide-eyed and smiling. All look great.

Subzeroace · 01-27-2009, 07:18 PM

Not only is Cass loving this, Subbeh is too! They look great, I'm liking the first one the best. You've got Foster's style down great, something I can't do. I'm always converting everything into my own style XD

HerrimanWasHere · 01-27-2009, 07:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Lynnie

I think you did a great job on all four of them, honestly.

I like the first one the best, I love that pouty look. The second one seems a little off I suppose, I think her head is too oblong and her bangs are a bit too long. The fourth one her head seems small, and her chin has become flush with her neck. But I think the first and third are near perfect.

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Originally Posted by frankie_fan

I agree. The first one I like the best. I think Cass is gonna love this.

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Originally Posted by Cassini90125

You think correctly.

Hard to pick a favorite, really, but I'm kind of partial to #4, if only because she's wide-eyed and smiling. All look great.

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Originally Posted by Subzeroace

Not only is Cass loving this, Subbeh is too! They look great, I'm liking the first one the best. You've got Foster's style down great, something I can't do. I'm always converting everything into my own style XD

Yay for people helping me! # 2 was actually the first one I did. I was trying to get the hang of her. But I ended up making her face look like Ron Stoppable's. (Poor Frankie!)

#4 was mostly to try doing profile. (I tend to do the lazy 45 degree angles.) But yeah...It is the only pic I did with her having wide "happy" eyes. Maybe I'm just starting to get use to her being angry at Funny Bunny?

Glad one of the ultimate Frankie fans liked my stuff. (I'm planning one doing and posting more practice work. I need to have her down before I start the Cross-over doodle!)

Subzeroace- I would draw them in my own style...But what would be the point? I love this style so much! Of course I'm still trying to learn it... Don't discouarge yourself! I bet you could do it!

Mac-a-lacka · 01-27-2009, 11:09 PM

Excellent job!

jekylljuice · 01-28-2009, 02:26 AM

I think that they're all very good! The fourth sketch is the only one which seems slightly off, largely because her chin seems to be of a slightly different shape to usual, but otherwise that's really very excellent for your first attempt at drawing her. I'm sure that your crossover is gonna rock.

Subzeroace · 01-28-2009, 07:15 PM

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Originally Posted by HerrimanWasHere

Yay for people helping me! # 2 was actually the first one I did. I was trying to get the hang of her. But I ended up making her face look like Ron Stoppable's. (Poor Frankie!)

So this is Frankie doing the Puppy Dog Pout then? Nice XD

HerrimanWasHere · 01-30-2009, 04:52 PM

Tada! Even more that I did just a few moments ago. Did it while watching The Great Mouse detective. (I know, that's my second time watching that movie today! Is there a type of rehab for those that get obsessed with things?)

Anywho, more honest thoughts please!

01-27-2009, 06:28 PM	#1
HerrimanWasHere At Home Non Omnis Moria "I dislike you with great intensity." Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Wonderland Posts: 120	Frankie Practice. Need Your Opinions. Here is the info: I am planning on doing a FHfIF/Sound of Music crossover. But I hadn't drawn Frankie before, so I tried sketching out a few different expressions. Because I want this crossover to be perfect, I want you to criticise me...And harshly. If you have any suggestions, I'll take those too. (Anyone know where to find a Frankie tutorial?) __________________ It's not the best idea to write comments, when you're in a dire need of sleep. ~"No, sir, I make it a rule of mine: the more it looks like Queer Street, the less I ask." ~ Last edited by HerrimanWasHere; 01-27-2009 at 06:29 PM.

01-27-2009, 06:49 PM	#2
Lynnie Lady of Brightwood Dream maker, wherever you're going I'm going your way Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: The Emerald City, in the Evergreen State, where everything is GREEN Posts: 2,419	I think you did a great job on all four of them, honestly. I like the first one the best, I love that pouty look. The second one seems a little off I suppose, I think her head is too oblong and her bangs are a bit too long. The fourth one her head seems small, and her chin has become flush with her neck. But I think the first and third are near perfect. __________________ MySpace-Facebook-LiveJournal-Y!Profile-Dragon Cave

01-27-2009, 07:01 PM	#3
frankie_fan Resident Movie Buff But that's another show Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: I come from the land down under Posts: 1,078	I agree. The first one I like the best. I think Cass is gonna love this. __________________ My deviantART page My myCast.io page

01-27-2009, 07:18 PM	#5
Subzeroace Has a PhD in Horribleness Burning things is fun and useful! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A place to live, a place to grow, Ontari-ari-ari-O Posts: 500	Not only is Cass loving this, Subbeh is too! They look great, I'm liking the first one the best. You've got Foster's style down great, something I can't do. I'm always converting everything into my own style XD __________________

01-27-2009, 11:09 PM	#7
Mac-a-lacka Equus Reptilicus Lance Armstrong, eat your heart out. Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Tenino, Washington. Posts: 699	Excellent job! __________________ "Mac-a-lacka, so glad you could make it."

01-28-2009, 02:26 AM	#8
jekylljuice Executive Weasel Ball jekylljuice was here. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: the 44th floor (not counting the mezzanine) Posts: 1,568	I think that they're all very good! The fourth sketch is the only one which seems slightly off, largely because her chin seems to be of a slightly different shape to usual, but otherwise that's really very excellent for your first attempt at drawing her. I'm sure that your crossover is gonna rock. __________________ That's it, The End, But you'll get over it, My Friend. Last edited by jekylljuice; 01-28-2009 at 04:41 AM.

01-30-2009, 04:52 PM	#10
HerrimanWasHere At Home Non Omnis Moria "I dislike you with great intensity." Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Wonderland Posts: 120	Tada! Even more that I did just a few moments ago. Did it while watching The Great Mouse detective. (I know, that's my second time watching that movie today! Is there a type of rehab for those that get obsessed with things?) Anywho, more honest thoughts please! __________________ It's not the best idea to write comments, when you're in a dire need of sleep. ~"No, sir, I make it a rule of mine: the more it looks like Queer Street, the less I ask." ~