I?m rewriting the whole thing. Now looking back, both the art and pacing are way out of wack. I need a to decide on a style that compromises between my two influences (CN and modern manga style).
Here?s an attempt. Also possible spoiler, now that I look at it.
Plus? Who remembers Red Hooded Chacha from the old CN days?
As for the Frankie beef, you?re all wrong. I?m not telling why, though.