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Old 01-14-2008, 11:18 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Ignate View Post
Hm... as long as you don't have every single character falling in love with you or anything.
I don't really see any serious problems with it, we'll see what others have to say.
Uh, no. Definitely not. Thanks for the thoughts, Ignate!

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Originally Posted by pitbulllady View Post
Sounds like she'd be a good friend for Bloppy Pants, lol. She really doesn't sound too "Mary-Sue-ish", since Mary Sue's are usually Miss Perfection and do not have character "flaws" like shyness or worrying. Plus, their main purpose is usually to fall madly in love with one of the main characters, and it's usually love at first sight, without any bickering or other issues or even a period of time just to get to know each other as friends.

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When I started developing Jasmine's character, I wanted her to NOT be Miss Perfection and have no character flaws. I mean, she's far from perfect, as the plans I have for her past show, and her shyness is very intense.

I will admit that I do have some romantic motives here, but it's not as you described-- if the episode sequence I have is just so (I plan on writing the series using the series as my time line), the romantic interest won't fully show until what would be the start of season two, so it's not instantaneous; it's not "madly in love," either-- Jasmine has the feelings for the character in question, but it's not sunshine, lollipops and roses. I would almost sugest that she has a mild paranoia that he's not going to love her back or love her and leave her, but I'm still fine-tuning all the details. And trust me, there will be issues in the relationship-- mostly trying to get Jasmine to not be so agonzingly shy and/or to open up to people. The friendship will be developed fairly quickly (again, I need to research episode sequence here), but the romantic interest shouldn't come into play until later.
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