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Old 11-23-2009, 06:04 PM   #5
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Alright, I've read through it. Although it was a bit repetitive after 3/4 of the chapters ("[x] could only..." "[x] had never this kind of power..."), and sometimes it felt like it was a battle but you threw in the Foster's characters, who didn't seem to really do much (I could be wrong, they're probably just paralyzed from having to see such unlimited power all the time) I was still stunned by how well-written it is, full of action, humor, and many references to the greatest times in Foster's history.

One nit-pick, though.
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SLADE? Come on, please come up with better, original villains, Slade is Robin's villain, not Jason's. XD


Please post more updates to it, and I'll gladly read on. Great job and I hope to see more from you! Maybe a sequel if you get that far?

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